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New chillout song "Desire" ; Comments wanted :-)

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KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Mon Sep 24, 2012 8:29 am New chillout song "Desire" ; Comments wanted :-)

Today I made a new chillout song called "Desire".

Here it is:
new version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire-version-910

old version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire

Comments are very welcome! :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:29 am, edited 2 times in total.
KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:05 pm

Bump! :-)
KVRist
 
83 posts since 19 May, 2012

Postby megalodonnl; Tue Sep 25, 2012 1:52 pm

Well it's chill out alright :) Although I would welcome a little variation in tonal Centre and drums too. Further it sounds fine to me.
KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Tue Sep 25, 2012 9:36 pm

Hi megalodonnl,
many thanks for your hint.
It motivated my to make a new version.
I added a accouctic guitar and I made some little changes on the drums.

Here is the new version:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire

Do you think that the new version is better?I
KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:59 am

Bump! :-)
KVRist
 
83 posts since 19 May, 2012

Postby megalodonnl; Tue Nov 20, 2012 3:33 pm

Well, haven't been here till now. I think u also might wanna look into better drum sounds cause these sound a bit cheap. I do like the congas. What I meant in previous post was tonal changes added to the composition itself, although in lounge /chillout music u can perhaps get away with just using one progression, I prefer more since the whole song becomes more versatile. But I like the general mood of the song;peaceful. Just what humanity needs in these days - peace and upliftment.
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KVRAF
 
8874 posts since 12 Mar, 2012, from South Bavaria - near the alps... :-)

Postby Tricky-Loops; Tue Nov 20, 2012 4:01 pm

The pad is nice, but the beat could be a bit louder and with more variation... :wink:
KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Wed Nov 21, 2012 3:26 am

Many thanks for your tips. I look what I can do to make the song better with your tips. :-)
KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Thu Nov 22, 2012 4:29 am

Today I made a new version of the song.
I take another comp for the stereo bus. It is now the Native instruments VC 2a
I made some little changes with the drum groove and I added a new groove at 5:20.

Here it is:
http://soundcloud.com/musikus/desire-version-910

Hope you like it.
It is better now?
I am very interested in your opinion! :-)
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KVRAF
 
4273 posts since 5 Aug, 2006, from UK - Here!
  

Postby folderol; Fri Nov 23, 2012 1:32 pm

Very recognisable as your work, but smoother and much more sophisticated than your early work.
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was)
KVRAF
 
1544 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Thu Nov 29, 2012 12:52 am

Hi folderol,
many thanks for your comment. .-)
Your opinion is very important for me.

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