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A theme for Ciin (piano)

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Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Thu Jul 26, 2012 1:16 pm A theme for Ciin (piano)

Hi guys,

I just wrote this:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kBru1EZg6U

what do you guys think? comments appreciated :)

- Jesse
Last edited by Jesse Gorter on Wed Dec 05, 2012 9:04 am, edited 1 time in total.
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seismic1
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6765 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Thu Jul 26, 2012 3:36 pm

Good track, Jesse. This has a nice melodic progression which seems to radiate a feeling of sadness. It feels to me like soundtrack material, maybe for a romantic tragedy set in the 1920s or thereabouts.

Good work :)
Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Fri Jul 27, 2012 8:31 am

Hi,

ooh a romantic tragedy of 1920...<3
I love the idea :)
polyslax
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8047 posts since 11 Dec, 2003, from Canada

Postby polyslax; Fri Jul 27, 2012 3:10 pm

Yes, definitely a sweeping cinematic vibe loaded with drama - nice work!
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Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Sat Jul 28, 2012 6:18 am

let's notify hollywood then!
HOUCEMATE
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11 posts since 27 Dec, 2011

Postby HOUCEMATE; Sun Jul 29, 2012 9:50 am

It started out really good, sounds like it came right out of a movie. My only remark would be that it misses a bit fullness, personally I think it could use a bit more low end. Other than that, nice work!
Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Sun Aug 05, 2012 7:18 am

Hey I think you are right :)

Here's part two btw:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gYXznjjhpkY

enjoy :)
polyslax
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8047 posts since 11 Dec, 2003, from Canada

Postby polyslax; Mon Aug 06, 2012 3:30 am

That's a delight, very nice work and I enjoyed the sort of celtic vibe to it. :)
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daggdroppe
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25 posts since 2 Jul, 2012, from sweden

Postby daggdroppe; Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:28 am

really nice work!

love it =)
Jesse Gorter
KVRist
 
441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Wed Aug 08, 2012 12:09 pm

daggdroppe wrote:really nice work!

love it =)


Thanks!

Poly: I didn't notice the Celtic vibe.....cool!
ghettosynth
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4140 posts since 13 Oct, 2009

Postby ghettosynth; Wed Aug 08, 2012 2:18 pm

Is that a bad note about 1:27 or so, or was that on purpose? It was distracting enough for me to post. Whenever I play notes like that I like to play them twice, louder the second time, so that the listener knows that it's supposed to be that way.
any1particular
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946 posts since 12 Mar, 2008, from Detriot Michigan USA

Postby any1particular; Thu Aug 09, 2012 4:45 am

Nice composition you have here Jesse!

The intro has this unpredictable quality to it that keeps the listener interested. Then it sounds like you're improvising later on..even some 'blue' notes...and to keep it interesting you change keys...and back to the intro....more key changes...

Sweet!
Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Sat Aug 11, 2012 1:33 pm

ghettosynth wrote:Is that a bad note about 1:27 or so, or was that on purpose? It was distracting enough for me to post. Whenever I play notes like that I like to play them twice, louder the second time, so that the listener knows that it's supposed to be that way.



The 'bad' note is on purpose ;-)
And playing them twice wouldn't work :) in classical music this happens all the time contrary to popmusic
Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Thu Aug 16, 2012 7:14 am

Here's the final....tadaa:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QjOANrPXGJs

Now it's finished....
Jesse Gorter
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441 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Sun Dec 02, 2012 5:15 am

there's a better recording now :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kBru1EZg6U
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