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Emerald Tablet
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4565 posts since 7 Apr, 2002, from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh

Postby Emerald Tablet; Sun Sep 01, 2013 10:03 am YAF telescopes

Constellations laughed
We stood under neon
The observer effects
Took place over eons
Fingers fiddled on focus
Dew dripped and reflected
Once we were Gods
Now we stand corrected

www.youreallfree.com/music/YAF_telescopes.mp3
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Frantz
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2781 posts since 18 Jul, 2008, from New York

Postby Frantz; Mon Sep 02, 2013 4:20 pm

I like those lyrics. Too bad you didn't use them in the track.
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nineofkings
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863 posts since 9 Apr, 2011

Postby nineofkings; Mon Sep 02, 2013 5:52 pm

Same here, especially the last two lines. I do like the laid-back, almost exotic vibe of the actual song though. The only thing I'd say in criticism is that some sections of the arpeggios seem a bit off, like they don't quite gel with the background chords.
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Emerald Tablet
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Postby Emerald Tablet; Tue Sep 03, 2013 12:20 am

nineofkings wrote:Same here, especially the last two lines. I do like the laid-back, almost exotic vibe of the actual song though. The only thing I'd say in criticism is that some sections of the arpeggios seem a bit off, like they don't quite gel with the background chords.



Heyyyy wonderguy! :-)
Thanks for listening buddy

The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it :-)

exotic ... mmmmm must have been been my mood
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tehlord
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6791 posts since 22 Sep, 2008, from Windsor. UK

Postby tehlord; Tue Sep 03, 2013 3:09 am

Brilliant work once again.

Personally I love the arps and the way they moved in and out of the expected.

Brilliant sound choice and perfect drums.

Clever bastard :D
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macmurphy
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2441 posts since 21 Jul, 2004

Postby macmurphy; Tue Sep 03, 2013 7:37 am

tehlord wrote:
Clever bastard :D


yep! i love the drifty feel of this and the insistent yet delicate flow.

another great piece Remmie :)

neil.
sazb30
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1014 posts since 11 Sep, 2008, from UK

Postby sazb30; Tue Sep 03, 2013 11:54 am

that's really cool! I'd love to hear it with a vocal ;-)
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nineofkings
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Postby nineofkings; Tue Sep 03, 2013 2:55 pm

Emerald Tablet wrote: The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it :-)


Not at all, I liked the detunedness, it was just some of the notes seemed to hang away from the other instruments, making it - well, disjointed actually. On second thought, it does exactly what it's meant to.
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folderol
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4361 posts since 5 Aug, 2006, from UK - Here!

Postby folderol; Wed Sep 04, 2013 1:38 pm

What can I say? It all flows perfectly to me :hail:
It wasn't me! (well, actually, it probably was)
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Emerald Tablet
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Postby Emerald Tablet; Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:05 am

folderol wrote:What can I say? It all flows perfectly to me :hail:


Thanks sir :-))
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Emerald Tablet
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Postby Emerald Tablet; Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:06 am

nineofkings wrote:
Emerald Tablet wrote: The slightly detuned arpeggios were meant to give a disjoninted feel
Looks like i overdid it :-)


Not at all, I liked the detunedness, it was just some of the notes seemed to hang away from the other instruments, making it - well, disjointed actually. On second thought, it does exactly what it's meant to.



I think youre right!
On to the next :-)

hug
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core
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4238 posts since 2 Sep, 2005, from city of lights (nl)

Postby core; Fri Sep 06, 2013 3:54 am

Beautiful tune, I love the drift/detune. Totally mesmerizing theme. :tu:
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Emerald Tablet
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Postby Emerald Tablet; Sat Sep 07, 2013 10:35 am

core wrote:Beautiful tune, I love the drift/detune. Totally mesmerizing theme. :tu:


Thanks sir!

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