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Radical Shadows Under a Large Tree (Techno/Electronic)

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radiantvoid
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45 posts since 3 Aug, 2011

Postby radiantvoid; Sun Mar 16, 2014 4:13 pm Radical Shadows Under a Large Tree (Techno/Electronic)

https://soundcloud.com/radiantvoid/radi ... er-a-large

Comments/Criticism is appreciated! Thanks
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sbj
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482 posts since 17 Aug, 2012, from Denmark

Postby sbj; Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:13 am Re: Radical Shadows Under a Large Tree (Techno/Electronic)

Let me be honest with you and say the mix doesn't
work for me.
I think the drums need to be much more prominent.
Maybe some suitable compression would help + EQ

At 2.55 the cymbals is taking all the attention.
Try to remove some of the bottom with EQ or
simply lower them.

The music itself is quite interesting and full of
good ideas.
If you get the sound of it more balanced I think
you have fine track.

Cheers :tu:
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radiantvoid
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45 posts since 3 Aug, 2011

Postby radiantvoid; Tue Mar 18, 2014 8:24 am Re: Radical Shadows Under a Large Tree (Techno/Electronic)

Thanks man!

Was definitely a little nervous about posting this track because it didn't really quite groove the way some of my other stuff has, couldn't quite figure out/fix the problem though. I may try and mess around with it a bit when I get the chance
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seismic1
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6840 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Wed Mar 19, 2014 2:28 pm Re: Radical Shadows Under a Large Tree (Techno/Electronic)

I think I'm going to agree with sbj here. The music is definitely interesting, with lots of quirky melodic and harmonic ideas. I like the distorted lead synth and that growling bass. The drums have quite a dry character overall. Maybe adding some reverb to the snare might liven it up a little.

Good work :)

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