Quirkwork
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- Narcissistic Messiah
- Topic Starter
- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
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- KVRAF
- 5223 posts since 20 Jul, 2010
I don't think that beat is really doing the track any favours. Sure, maybe you don't want the drums to be a focal point, but then why use the massive 909 kit? I dono, it just kinda killed an otherwise interesting track to me. Giving the rhythm track a background element, like some hats or shakers, would help me get into it more.
The guitar chords in the A section also felt a bit flat as well. Maybe some FX and layering to pick out certain notes or just fill the sound out a bit more?
You know me, I tend to prefer mid-to-maximalism, so take my advice with a pinch of salt. I much preferred the B section with the subtle resonant poker and the heavier sounds.
Interesting you started out with a minor and then major chord on the same root. I've been playing around with mixing up major and minor as well, it's quite a quirky sound.
The guitar chords in the A section also felt a bit flat as well. Maybe some FX and layering to pick out certain notes or just fill the sound out a bit more?
You know me, I tend to prefer mid-to-maximalism, so take my advice with a pinch of salt. I much preferred the B section with the subtle resonant poker and the heavier sounds.
Interesting you started out with a minor and then major chord on the same root. I've been playing around with mixing up major and minor as well, it's quite a quirky sound.
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- Narcissistic Messiah
- Topic Starter
- 4562 posts since 8 Apr, 2002 from https://soundcloud.com/remcoh
Howdy! Thanks soo much for the constructive and apreciated feedback
The kick is not a 909 but drumatic3 which has been my personal sin for years
I`ll make a lighter version of this if i find the time.
I`ll add more velocity layers to the chords then to. this was put together in an hour
Proly some sort of attention span desorder and i`m very happy that everyone suffers from it so i seem to fit in perfectly nowadays
hug
p.s. minor major ...yep and augmented and any tonal system without thinking too much about the theory behind it all
The kick is not a 909 but drumatic3 which has been my personal sin for years
I`ll make a lighter version of this if i find the time.
I`ll add more velocity layers to the chords then to. this was put together in an hour
Proly some sort of attention span desorder and i`m very happy that everyone suffers from it so i seem to fit in perfectly nowadays
hug
p.s. minor major ...yep and augmented and any tonal system without thinking too much about the theory behind it all
