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Just messin'

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jethrobull
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1194 posts since 5 Jun, 2011, from England,UK

Postby jethrobull; Thu Apr 03, 2014 2:47 pm Just messin'

It is ...
https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/one-dimension-2
whatever it is.

As usual feedback is very welcome and much appreciated. :)

the bulk of this track was made with Psychic modulation plugs :love:
Last edited by jethrobull on Mon Apr 07, 2014 6:07 am, edited 1 time in total.
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seismic1
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6662 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Fri Apr 04, 2014 5:42 pm Re: Just messin'

Nice work with the percussion patterns on here. They are quite lively, but manage to sit nicely with the relaxed vibe of the track. I like the wavering detune effects on the synths. I guess that is Phonec. When the vocals came in I was reminded of a modern-day Mike Oldfield.

I might pick up Aethereal in the sale this weekend.

Good work :)
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Frantz
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2653 posts since 18 Jul, 2008, from New York

Postby Frantz; Fri Apr 04, 2014 6:01 pm Re: Just messin'

Cool track. 8)

I thought the drums were too disco and active in the beginning. Later when the track started to build, the drums blended better. So my suggestion would be to use very minimal drums in the beginning and build them up along with the rest of the track.
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astrochimp
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723 posts since 30 Apr, 2008

Postby astrochimp; Sun Apr 06, 2014 1:12 pm Re: Just messin'

it's a great track! :tu: :)

i wasn't sure about the drums in the beginning, too. but i think they are perfect, when the other instruments join in. so i kinda agree with frantz's suggestion and kinda don't, because it's always cool, when parts irritate at first and make sense later.
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Allomerus
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866 posts since 28 Aug, 2012, from Melbourne, Australia

Postby Allomerus; Mon Apr 07, 2014 3:25 am Re: Just messin'

Great track bully. The detuned synth from about 1:40 is great. I like your pads and the chord choices. Everything really melds together beautifully towards the end, sort of like a Peter Gabriel track where everything has a purpose and adds to the overall ambience. Well done! :)
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jethrobull
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1194 posts since 5 Jun, 2011, from England,UK

Postby jethrobull; Mon Apr 07, 2014 6:12 am Re: Just messin'

Thank you all for the kind words and important feedback,really appreciate it!
I have took the advice and shortened the intro and faded the main drums in and added the other percussion later.
Hope this is better?

Thank you for listening...
:D
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astrochimp
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723 posts since 30 Apr, 2008

Postby astrochimp; Mon Apr 07, 2014 11:32 am Re: Just messin'

could you post both versions? i'm really not sure, if i didn't like the first version better.
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Frantz
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2653 posts since 18 Jul, 2008, from New York

Postby Frantz; Mon Apr 07, 2014 6:10 pm Re: Just messin'

Based on my recollection of the original, I think the new version works better. :tu:
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ecamburn
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389 posts since 16 Dec, 2003

Postby ecamburn; Tue Apr 08, 2014 5:18 am Re: Just messin'

I didn't hear the original but I really dug this. I really like the destined synth chord progression that starts around 1:15. Really enjoyable listen.

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