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deltron
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36 posts since 20 Apr, 2013, from england

Postby deltron; Mon Apr 14, 2014 1:56 pm i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made

hi, ive made a song and would really appreciate you guys checking it out and letting me know what you think?

http://soundcloud.com/v-e-e-d/goodbye-cool-world
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jethrobull
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1301 posts since 5 Jun, 2011, from England,UK

Postby jethrobull; Mon Apr 14, 2014 2:03 pm Re: i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made

I really enjoyed this,its a nice little track.The drums are little bit dull for my tastes but all in all great work! :tu:
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Rah
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441 posts since 30 May, 2013, from Space is the Place

Postby Rah; Mon Apr 14, 2014 3:26 pm Re: i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made

I like it a lot

I like the filtered synth and rhythmic amplitude modulations

I feel the track could use a third part that goes somewhere new musically. At the moment, it feels like the journey starts well, gets going, but then doesn't 'go anywhere'
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ecamburn
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392 posts since 16 Dec, 2003

Postby ecamburn; Tue Apr 15, 2014 5:34 am Re: i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made

An enjoyable tune that keeps getting better as it goes on IMO. Neat transition at :40. I found the drum programming to be quite unique and enjoyable, though you might try introducing some variation to add interest. The piece ends abruptly, so like Rah suggested you might consider another section or try to bring the end around to a more recognizable conclusion.
deltron
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36 posts since 20 Apr, 2013, from england

Postby deltron; Tue Apr 15, 2014 5:47 am Re: i'd really appreciate some feedback on a song i made

cheers thanks a lot for the feedback, much appreciated!

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