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Timeless Downfall [Electronic]

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Qatarsis
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85 posts since 14 Feb, 2013, from Germany

Postby Qatarsis; Wed Apr 16, 2014 3:47 am Timeless Downfall [Electronic]

Hey guys :)

I'd like to share my new track 'Timeless Downfall'
I'm not quite sure about the mix, is it too messy like that ?
anyway, i hope you like what you hear !
i appreciate any kind of suggestions, critics etc.
thanks for taking time :)

https://soundcloud.com/qatarsis/timeless-downfall

cheers
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ecamburn
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393 posts since 16 Dec, 2003

Postby ecamburn; Thu Apr 17, 2014 6:33 am Re: Timeless Downfall [Electronic]

There were some very nice sounds in this tune. I enjoyed the dark, swampy, brooding vibe. To me the piece comes off mainly as a beat with bass and atmospherics. To my ears, the tune would be more engaging with more melodic content - either lead lines, arps, etc. I really felt that the tempo change at 2:27 pulled down the energy of the tune. An enjoyable listen
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seismic1
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7446 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Fri Apr 18, 2014 12:47 pm Re: Timeless Downfall [Electronic]

Definitely an entertaining piece. I liked the dark atmosphere and the sound choices were good. this would be good for OST applications. I think maybe a not-too upfront "thin" lead sound playing a slow dark melodic motif might help this. I dunno, maybe a 'tron string or brass line in the background, just to add even more unease.

Good work :)
Qatarsis
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85 posts since 14 Feb, 2013, from Germany

Postby Qatarsis; Sun Apr 20, 2014 10:18 am Re: Timeless Downfall [Electronic]

@ecamburn: thanks alot man, really glad to hear that ! i like how you describe the sound with swampy / broody actually :P
i get your point with the melody, i'll see what i can do, will definitely try to change that or to add some new part with a melody

@seismic: thanks alot man :) whats an OST application :X ? yeah, i'll see what i can do there, some kind of additional theme / melody / new instrument in general will be good for sure ! the brass line-idea sounds really interesting, i'd like to find a nice fitting sample but thats so hard to find :D

anyway, thanks for the nice words and suggestion guys, will upload a new version soon here :)

best regards and happy easter ;)
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seismic1
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7446 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Sun Apr 20, 2014 1:03 pm Re: Timeless Downfall [Electronic]

Original Soundtrack.

Happy Easter :)

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