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pser
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19 posts since 11 Jun, 2005

Postby pser; Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:32 pm Je peux respirer

What do you think about my latest track?

http://soundcloud.com/galacticshadesofdust/je-peux-respirer
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Tricky-Loops
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9651 posts since 12 Mar, 2012, from South Bavaria - near the alps... :-)

Postby Tricky-Loops; Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:45 pm Re: Je peux respirer

Nice track but the bass doesn't fit very well to it - a deeper bass line would sound better as you have pretty much high frequency content in your track; I miss some low end...

And the bridge could be better, too.

But I love this detuned pad synth! :D
pser
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19 posts since 11 Jun, 2005

Postby pser; Thu May 01, 2014 5:09 am Re: Je peux respirer

Thank you for the reply, I will have another go on it with your advice in my mind.

Cheers

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