Dark Scary Ambient Psytrance - Comparing two versions of the song

[BrainClaim]

Hello everybody!
Here I go with the new remake of my "Forest On Mushrooms" song, which is supposed to be much more scary, more psychedelic and little bit more alive. Yet still it is amateur. I will be very grateful for feedbacks!

The 2014 Remake: https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/fore ... 2014-scary

The old version: https://soundcloud.com/brain-claim/fore ... oms-just-a

[DJ Warmonger]

The new one has somewhat better bass, but otherwise there's no big difference. Tracks lack power and focus and are made mostly out of noises. You first need some groove and driving basline and then can build effects and flow around then.

Also, the mix completely lacks low-end, sounds as high-passed.

[BrainClaim]

Thanks so much for your feedback! Yeah, it lacks power and climax, I have already been told that, that's why it is rather more ambient than psychedelic trance. Thanks for your advice, anyway! I appreciate that!