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Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

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MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Tue Jun 17, 2014 3:00 am Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

Hi Guys,
made a new track.
I like to think that it's pretty awesome, but your opinion/feedback/tips are more than welcome!
https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/lose-control
:party:
Last edited by MaartenP on Tue Jun 24, 2014 5:56 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Jace-BeOS
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1808 posts since 7 Jan, 2005, from Corporate States of America

Postby Jace-BeOS; Tue Jun 17, 2014 4:28 am Re: Loose control (Experimental)

Did you mean to say "loose" as in "not tight", or "lose" as in "lost"?

I took a listen, but I think my commentary mightn't be appropriate, since I'm not into this style. Some neat sounds and I'm glad to see a change up in structure at the ⅓ mark, since this genre tends to be boringly repetitive to my tastes. But that's me and my taste :-)
Cheers!
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MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Wed Jun 18, 2014 12:48 am Re: Loose control (Experimental)

Jace-BeOS wrote:Did you mean to say "loose" as in "not tight", or "lose" as in "lost"?

I took a listen, but I think my commentary mightn't be appropriate, since I'm not into this style. Some neat sounds and I'm glad to see a change up in structure at the ⅓ mark, since this genre tends to be boringly repetitive to my tastes. But that's me and my taste :-)
Cheers!


lol, I meant "lose control":P
English is not my native language as you can see;)
but yeah, i tried to do some different rhythms and such to keep it interesting. imo it doesn't really get repetitive or boring. atleast i tried to avoid that;)
thnx for the response!
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Jace-BeOS
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1808 posts since 7 Jan, 2005, from Corporate States of America

Postby Jace-BeOS; Wed Jun 18, 2014 1:47 pm Re: Loose control (Experimental)

:-) Welcome to the inconsistency of the English language. I'm glad I grew up with it, or I would never have learned well enough to communicate. As is, my spelling sucks and I'm only getting some words memorized finally at age 38.

I'm a monolingual, so you're doing better than me by just communicating in more than one language. Cheers! :-)
- dysamoria.com
my music @ SoundCloud
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Thu Jun 19, 2014 12:14 am Re: Loose control (Experimental)

Jace-BeOS wrote::-) Welcome to the inconsistency of the English language. I'm glad I grew up with it, or I would never have learned well enough to communicate. As is, my spelling sucks and I'm only getting some words memorized finally at age 38.

I'm a monolingual, so you're doing better than me by just communicating in more than one language. Cheers! :-)


lol, yeah i can speak and write english pretty well but i also have dyslexia so there are some faults sometimes;)

but back to the track...
who got some more feedback for me?!
Brundle
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4 posts since 16 Jun, 2014

Postby Brundle; Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:18 am Re: Loose control (Experimental)

could imagine this being played in a venue at 4am and everyone going for it. very nice
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:54 pm Re: Loose control (Experimental)

Brundle wrote:could imagine this being played in a venue at 4am and everyone going for it. very nice

thnx! it was made for those kinda purposes;)
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Sun Jun 22, 2014 2:25 am Re: Loose control (Experimental)

Feedback please!!!
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Tue Jun 24, 2014 2:16 am Re: Loose control (Experimental)

*bump
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Wed Jun 25, 2014 1:25 am Re: Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

C'mon people, i need some criticism!
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Fri Jun 27, 2014 9:46 am Re: Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

I gues i'll just keep *bumpin this...
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V0RT3X
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4144 posts since 3 Jul, 2012

Postby V0RT3X; Fri Jun 27, 2014 7:20 pm Re: Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

Almost sounds like hardstyle.
Having the best tools and technical knowledge isn't gonna do much for you if you don't understand how to make good music.
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Mon Jun 30, 2014 5:50 am Re: Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

V0RT3X wrote:Almost sounds like hardstyle.

True, but yet it isn't. :wink:

do you have some tips or feedback maybe?!
i can't believe no one has anything to criticize.
i want points to work on!!! :help:
MaartenP
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112 posts since 8 Dec, 2013, from Groningen

Postby MaartenP; Fri Jul 11, 2014 1:07 am Re: Lose control (Experimental) (updated version)

maybe now some people willing to give me some feedback?!

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