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Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

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Snow Fox
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25 posts since 6 Nov, 2013

Postby Snow Fox; Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:17 am Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

New song, check it out. Any feedback would be nice. :)

https://soundcloud.com/dolphinpark/the-one-that-fell
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seismic1
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7348 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Thu Jul 17, 2014 3:08 pm Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Nice, mellow vibes. Good for late-night listening after a long, busy and frustrating day. It feels a little like the Donnie Darko Mad World remake. I think you have some clipping distortion at 1:25. Maybe cut the levels by a couple of dB.

Good work :)
Snow Fox
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Postby Snow Fox; Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:46 pm Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Thanks, man! I'll fix up that clipping distortion, thanks for letting me know. :)
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Alias9593
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193 posts since 8 Dec, 2011, from Lebbeke, Belgium

Postby Alias9593; Fri Jul 18, 2014 1:39 am Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Nice track.
IMHO, using the low notes as a support with a little bit of compression or some saturation could be nice.
Good job anyway.
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Allomerus
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1040 posts since 28 Aug, 2012, from Melbourne, Australia

Postby Allomerus; Fri Jul 18, 2014 4:13 am Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Lovely pleasant music. Sound effects are good with it. :)
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TrekStar
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893 posts since 5 Jun, 2002, from Southern Germany

Postby TrekStar; Fri Jul 18, 2014 1:14 pm Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

your tune was gentle and made me feel good. also tasteful soundeffects.
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Snow Fox
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Postby Snow Fox; Sat Jul 19, 2014 7:53 am Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Thanks for the feedback everybody!
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Frantz
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3260 posts since 18 Jul, 2008, from New York

Postby Frantz; Sat Jul 19, 2014 8:51 am Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Nice job. It could have been longer and developed but it works well as a tasty little morsel.
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Snow Fox
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Postby Snow Fox; Sat Jul 19, 2014 12:24 pm Re: Dolphin Park - The One That Fell

Thanks, I kind of just wanted to get an idea out, so it ended up pretty short I guess. :/

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