Thoughts on my first original track (with vocals)

[Yacyn]

Hello guys!
I'm actually planning to start promoting my stuff any time soon and i want to know where do I stand
here's an unfinished preview of my first planned track, it's unmastered and the vocals quality ain't the best .. i'm aware of that

but what do you think about the flow of the music and the vocalist performance?

https://soundcloud.com/yacyn/well-be-sa ... hed-demo-1


Cheers!