Do You by Tangerine Holt

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Hi. New to the forums but heres a song I just finished today.
Please let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is more than welcome. Im aware that the main part is a little boring but outside of that...

https://soundcloud.com/tangerineholt/do-you

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First of all, please kill this "bigroomesque" lead starting at 1:34 (and then again, near the end of the track) - it sounds just lame and has nothing to do with the rest of the song.

Other than that, there are some fine sounds - I liked the part roughly between 2:47 and 3:40, I think this piece could be a basis of a new track, e.g., along the lines of atmospheric breaks or mellow progressive/deep house.

Mixing should be completely redone.
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i feel over compressed with muddy kick drum. ah the loudness war wages on...and on and on......
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