Hi. New to the forums but heres a song I just finished today.
Please let me know what you think. Constructive criticism is more than welcome. Im aware that the main part is a little boring but outside of that...
https://soundcloud.com/tangerineholt/do-you
Do You by Tangerine Holt
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- KVRer
- Topic Starter
- 11 posts since 20 May, 2015
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- KVRAF
- 5664 posts since 7 Feb, 2013
First of all, please kill this "bigroomesque" lead starting at 1:34 (and then again, near the end of the track) - it sounds just lame and has nothing to do with the rest of the song.
Other than that, there are some fine sounds - I liked the part roughly between 2:47 and 3:40, I think this piece could be a basis of a new track, e.g., along the lines of atmospheric breaks or mellow progressive/deep house.
Mixing should be completely redone.
Other than that, there are some fine sounds - I liked the part roughly between 2:47 and 3:40, I think this piece could be a basis of a new track, e.g., along the lines of atmospheric breaks or mellow progressive/deep house.
Mixing should be completely redone.
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- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
i feel over compressed with muddy kick drum. ah the loudness war wages on...and on and on......
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