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GFunk · Post by **GFunk** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 11:46 am

Here's my latest track I've made. Looking forward to hearing any feedback...

https://soundcloud.com/gavin-jackson/spirals

jasco · Post by **jasco** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 12:19 pm

Hi Gavin, solid track. However, I think it's positively screaming out for a vocal!

GFunk · Post by **GFunk** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 12:29 pm

Thanks Jasco! I see you're from Leeds........any good at singing?

jasco · Post by **jasco** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 12:32 pm

lol NO

Taifunk · Post by **Taifunk** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 1:58 pm

is a really nice track, it reminds me so much the mid-90s and puts in a good mood

GFunk · Post by **GFunk** » Thu Jul 09, 2015 8:06 pm

Thanks Taifunk. Glad I could lift your spirits.

Matt van k · Post by **Matt van k** » Fri Jul 10, 2015 9:20 am

A good choice for a Music cafe.

annode · Post by **annode** » Fri Jul 10, 2015 2:28 pm

Solid sounding track.
Instrument sounds are good.If me, I would shorten up the e-piano envelope so it sounds tighter and more percussive. (or quantize the midi track if that does the trick)
I also felt 16 measures before bringing in the next new part seemed too long.
If me, I would work on the hat and shaker rhythms. Being a shuffle beat, the hats and shaker are integral for a solid shuffle.
Took too long to get to the lead synth line...that goes back to the 16 measure thing above.

GFunk · Post by **GFunk** » Fri Jul 10, 2015 5:22 pm

@ Matt van k - Thanks dude.

@ annode - Thanks. I appreciate your feedback.

New "old school" Ibiza track - Spirals