KVR Audio

Coxy · Post by **Coxy** » Thu Jul 16, 2015 8:18 pm

I'm burning out on this one - what's your thoughts on next steps?

Ignore the very end bit after silence that was just me testing out different melodies.

https://soundcloud.com/coxys/2015-07-12a

Cheers

folderol · Post by **folderol** » Sat Jul 18, 2015 3:30 pm

Youve got some good ideas there. That repeating phrase - that is only really clear in the drop - could do with being more prominent, and (like this month's contest) maybe turn it into a call & response, either a different sound or an inversion of the phrase in some way - or both

I like the idea of the fnal drop then finish, but I'd suggest keeping just a little something faintly ticking over.

Coxy · Post by **Coxy** » Sun Jul 19, 2015 10:31 am

folderol wrote:Youve got some good ideas there. That repeating phrase - that is only really clear in the drop - could do with being more prominent, and (like this month's contest) maybe turn it into a call & response, either a different sound or an inversion of the phrase in some way - or both

I like the idea of the fnal drop then finish, but I'd suggest keeping just a little something faintly ticking over.

Thanks mate, good advice here - appreciated.

Thoughts so far?