KVR Audio

u_f_o · Post by **u_f_o** » Tue Aug 11, 2015 6:35 pm

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Sendy · Post by **Sendy** » Tue Aug 11, 2015 10:16 pm

It sounds like your bass notes are overlapping. Especially around the 1 minute mark this is very obvious and it's making the whole track muddy. I recommend switching the bass part to monophonic mode.

I like the whimsical nature of it, but it sounds a bit messy and directionless. Nothing really comes or goes or leads to anything else, there are some cool sounds and moments of potential, but I get the impression you're relatively new to making music. Keep at it and don't be afraid to thin out the note count

Frantz · Post by **Frantz** » Wed Aug 12, 2015 12:06 am

Out of the three tracks you posted recently, I liked this one the best. It's fun and the vocoder and synths sound nice. It was wise to stop it at 3 minutes since it's basically one idea repeated.

layzer · Post by **layzer** » Wed Aug 12, 2015 5:19 am

a fun track indeed. very good mix and cool vocoder sound. some other lyrical content would have changed it up a bit..even a small variation like, "mirror on the wall, will you drop me like a ball?"
"if i break you will you ball. will you cry and stain the wall?"

Sendy is right about the low end mud as it can be seen clearly in this spec analysis of that part of the song:
alot of energy going on at about the 30hz band.

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