First EDM track

[Robjw96]

Hi guys,
this is my first Edm track
Any advice, feedback or tips are greatly appreciated

https://soundcloud.com/r-w-727938935/wishing-for-hope

Thanks

[edgenet]

Nice track but you could defintely push up your bass way more (it sounds like there are none at this point, try to re-EQ your whole track) =) And try to add a little "humanized" flow to your strummed guitar and piano, this could help giving more feelings and rythm to your music.