Evil (Feedback needed)

[MaartenP]

Hi Guys,
i've been working on this track for a while now, and it's near completion.
but i could use some feedback on it.
take a listen and tell me what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/maarten-pool/evil-1/s-cXtZu

[manducator]

Hey Maarten,

I was waiting for the kick to euhm... kick in but it didn't. Your mix doesn't contain enough bottom end.

Compare this to your own HWND song and you will notice you can do better.

[MaartenP]

Hey Maarten,

I was waiting for the kick to euhm... kick in but it didn't. Your mix doesn't contain enough bottom end.

Compare this to your own HWND song and you will notice you can do better.

yeah i know,, i've been strugglin with the low end since i started working on this track but i can't get it right

but i will keep tryin;)
thnx!

[manducator]

I wonder what the problem could be. Did you layer kicks? Phase problems?

[Allomerus]

Great sounds and composition! I love the woooah sound at about 1:00.
The section at 2:10 ish is great, very evil, this would be a great place to put some low end thumps!
Well done!

[MaartenP]

I wonder what the problem could be. Did you layer kicks? Phase problems?

i think the main problem is that i didn't create the kick myself, i downloaded it but can't seem to proces it the right way.
i'm trying to contact the maker on some processing tips.
my own kicks are not good enough to create tracks with;)

https://soundcloud.com/bwazza/bwazzakickfreedownload
this is the kick

[MaartenP]

Great sounds and composition! I love the woooah sound at about 1:00.
The section at 2:10 ish is great, very evil, this would be a great place to put some low end thumps!
Well done!

thnx!

[MaartenP]

some more feedback?!

[MaartenP]

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