Built from an idea for a melody.
Basic at the moment but I'd like to build on this.
I quite like the melody. What do you reckon.
What to do .... ?
Feedback and advice most welcome.
Many thanks.
https://soundcloud.com/landslide-victor ... -last-time
Same As Last Time - Electonic pop
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 209 posts since 6 Sep, 2004
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- KVRer
- 4 posts since 18 Jun, 2016
Lyrics maybe??
:p
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- KVRian
- 645 posts since 4 Nov, 2013 from Vancouver, Canada
I like this one, too. My suggestion would be to try constructing more of an obvious verse-chorus dichotomy. As it is, you have a nice melodic theme that is suggestive of a verse, which repeats through a number of variations, but I suspect it might work even better if you interspersed that theme with a more chorus-like section that was modulated into a different key.