Fresh Producer - progressive critisism for Prog trance! (In development)

[RobbiePowers91]

Hello!

I don't really know where to start. This is a first for me - Forum - almost finishing music (premaster)- being productive. Who knows? maybe it will go somewhere. Ive always been a HUGE fan of progressive trance and anjuna beats anchors such as Ilan bluestone - lane 8 - oliver smith - good ole Bayer. I mean the list goes on and on.

In an attempt to be my own favorite anchor of a music that i feel has truly defined me, I offer you this. My work in progress - I think of it like a village - the more help i get - the better I raise it. Looking forward to being a part of this forum and sharing more work.

So without further delay - Here she is!

https://soundcloud.com/bobby-flowers-954614428/id-1

<3 Thanks!

[recursive one]

Nice track, beautiful and delicate melody, good atmosphere. The mix is well balanced but I think it needs to be a bit more powerful. Also I feel that it ends a bit too abruptly like you've run out of ideas and just let it lay. But if it is your first finished attempt, it is really good.

[RobbiePowers91]

Wow. Thank you so mmuchfor your feed back. I agree. I let the over excitement of completing something I like stop me from implimentint more ideas. Definetly needs more power. I suppose its not totally sqaused and optimized for all systems quite yet.

[DJ Warmonger]

Nice arrangement and flow, I liked the outro unlike Recursive One. But mix is poor, needs a lot of EQ work - especially at leads. Panning lives its own life, too.

The break in very middle sounds dull, add some modulation over time.

[RobbiePowers91]

This is why I'm so glad to be a part of a forum where I can ask for help. So new to all of this. Did some eqiing but I'm sure I could research more of this to better set the tracks individual pieces.