Waking The Daydream
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3508 posts since 12 May, 2011
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- KVRian
- 950 posts since 30 Nov, 2004
whoop those voices sounds nice!
it does seem to miss a melody section, like it's somehow a bit of a backing track!
pretty good backing track though
it does seem to miss a melody section, like it's somehow a bit of a backing track!
pretty good backing track though
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- KVRAF
- 11502 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK
Don't mention the 'tron! I mentioned it once, but I think I got away with it all right.
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240 - KVRAF
- 35162 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
Nice production. I like the vocals. I would have liked more development in the drums during the first section, but I didn't feel there was a melody missing.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3508 posts since 12 May, 2011
Hi, Basil!seismic1 wrote:Don't mention the 'tron! I mentioned it once, but I think I got away with it all right.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3508 posts since 12 May, 2011
I was criticized recently for making the drums too busy.thecontrolcentre wrote:Nice production. I like the vocals. I would have liked more development in the drums during the first section, but I didn't feel there was a melody missing.
I can't win! 
The main solo voice is EastWest's Bulgarian singer in the Voices Of Passion set. I'm in danger of using it too much, I like it so much.
Along with the 'trons!
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240
- KVRAF
- 35162 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
Just a little variation is what I mean. Some ghost notes, so to speak. Just to build toward the second part ...
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3508 posts since 12 May, 2011
I understand, I was smiling when I wrote that response. Sometimes less really is less!thecontrolcentre wrote:Just a little variation is what I mean. Some ghost notes, so to speak. Just to build toward the second part ...
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- KVRAF
- 6160 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
This was an interesting track.
I liked the whole track excluding some parts of course.
- Didn't go for the drum part in the 1st half.
- Don't like how you do the heavy (Genesis like) bass pedal sustain and hard on the pads section. Too over the top for me.
Good track. Liked the prog-rock approach. Sounded good as always, although i'm just here on my little PC speakers I didnt get the full experience.
I liked the whole track excluding some parts of course.
- Didn't go for the drum part in the 1st half.
- Don't like how you do the heavy (Genesis like) bass pedal sustain and hard on the pads section. Too over the top for me.
Good track. Liked the prog-rock approach. Sounded good as always, although i'm just here on my little PC speakers I didnt get the full experience.
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here. 
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 3508 posts since 12 May, 2011
1)annode wrote:This was an interesting track.
I liked the whole track excluding some parts of course.
- Didn't go for the drum part in the 1st half.
- Don't like how you do the heavy (Genesis like) bass pedal sustain and hard on the pads section. Too over the top for me.
Good track. Liked the prog-rock approach. Sounded good as always, although i'm just here on my little PC speakers I didnt get the full experience.
Will try harder with drum parts!
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My trademark! I'll look for a more, um, laidback trademark!...heavy (Genesis like) bass pedal sustain and hard on the pads section...
Thanks for all the comments, guys. Will try and take them on board.
You may prefer my latest effort (plug, plug)...
http://www.kvraudio.com/forum/viewtopic ... 4&t=478654
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- KVRAF
- 6160 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
I want to make this clear...when I comment on someones track, it's an individual perspective and I don't say what I don't care for, asking you to change it.
I'm also not looking for wise ass replies.
I did say it was interesting and I liked the whole track except...but you only notice what I didn't care for. Maybe that's something you might want to change.
As for your newest track, I didn't like it, and it's not ambient. If anything, it's new age.
Sorry i'm acting like a dick. I just woke up, maybe that's it.
I'm also not looking for wise ass replies.
I did say it was interesting and I liked the whole track except...but you only notice what I didn't care for. Maybe that's something you might want to change.
As for your newest track, I didn't like it, and it's not ambient. If anything, it's new age.
Sorry i'm acting like a dick. I just woke up, maybe that's it.
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here.
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- KVRAF
- 4881 posts since 4 Aug, 2006 from Helsinki
On my behalf, I see your point, and agree.annode wrote:I want to make this clear...when I comment on someones track, it's an individual perspective and I don't say what I don't care for, asking you to change it.
I'm also not looking for wise ass replies.
I did say it was interesting and I liked the whole track except...but you only notice what I didn't care for. Maybe that's something you might want to change.
As for your newest track, I didn't like it, and it's not ambient. If anything, it's new age.
Sorry i'm acting like a dick. I just woke up, maybe that's it.
I mean, in a nutshell, the production of the track is OK, but the song and arrangement is rather boring, even for the ambient (?) - as a friendly joke, the "n" was missing of the "waking"...
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thecontrolcentre thecontrolcentre https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=76240
- KVRAF
- 35162 posts since 27 Jul, 2005 from the wilds of wanny
Harry_HH wrote:... as a friendly joke, the "n" was missing of the "waking"...
