Nujabes style beat/instrumental

[shonoob]

recently started listening to nujabes & also starting to learn piano.

So naturally I tried my hand at it and threw this together tonight over evening coffee MADE IN ABLETON https://soundcloud.com/sucklord5000/95bpms

contemplating finishing it/making it 4-5 mins long or so

first time making anything hip-hop(ish), usually mucking about making house music and cheese pop

please let me know what you think or if it sucks because i am sucklord5000

thank you very much, i really appreciate it! and good day

[annode]

I don't think there is a need for those drums.
You have one verse of a good composition. The next is even more difficult, give it a try.
As for the style, it reminds me of an Asian soft style.
Finish it.

[Jesse Gorter]

I like nujabes, and Hazzy, and DJ okinawari style. cool! It's like they all mix beats with chill out piano haha.

I think a more tight drumbeat would sound better.