Collage of Infinity

[Adrian Earnshaw Music]

My latest track from this weekends music making created mainly with Spectrasonics Omnisphere. 
https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/collage-of-infinity

[annode]

A good example of using proper song writing elements, I believe.
Four counts on your pad chord. A melody. This may be all it has going for it.
I believe the drum beat could be tempo halved, changing the beat altogether possibly.
The same might go for the melody. Try using half as many notes over the same length of time. You can also replace 16th notes to 8th notes or longer. Don't over complicate melody.

Try forming a chorus section / with melody and if you want to get fancy create a short bridge section into the chorus or out from the chorus.

These are just suggestions based on typical song structure.
You have started building it, now you can continue it to it's conclusion.

[layzer]

good composition as Annode pointed out. productionwise it has an overall midrange heavy tone to my ears.
also the sounds sound compressed and thin especially the drums as expected from something made with Omnisphere.
Dynamic range is our friend.

[Adrian Earnshaw Music]

Thanks for the the feedback, I shall have a ponder.

[Cinebient]

Lovely song. I think the drums could have more presence but i like it.