Hey, just found this site and not sure if this is the right place to post but I was wondering if anyone could give me some feedback on a track I started today. Pretty new to producing and looking to improve!
https://soundcloud.com/wes-kilgour/new/s-8r28r
Thanks!
First Track Feedback
- KVRist
- 81 posts since 14 Jan, 2015
Cool mix of sounds, and groove. Good beginning, but kind of repetitive overall. Needs to evolve and breathe some more.
Also, nitpick, but take down that open hat on the off beats, it sounds too loud and dry for the rest of the mix.
peace
z
Also, nitpick, but take down that open hat on the off beats, it sounds too loud and dry for the rest of the mix.
peace
z
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
Good groove...rhythmically, all the layers work well together.
Effective combinations of timbres in there as well.
Sounds very 'early Warp Records' with its slowly evolving textures.
Definitely has potential. For me it now needs a strong hook of some sort - my choice would be a strong simple melody floating over the top.
Effective combinations of timbres in there as well.
Sounds very 'early Warp Records' with its slowly evolving textures.
Definitely has potential. For me it now needs a strong hook of some sort - my choice would be a strong simple melody floating over the top.