New german rock song online - feedback appreciated
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1142 posts since 9 Jul, 2006 from Germany
Yes, here it is - "Immer noch":
https://soundcloud.com/stoabach/sets/stoabach-playlist
You also may listen to my other songs.
Cheers Jens
https://soundcloud.com/stoabach/sets/stoabach-playlist
You also may listen to my other songs.
Cheers Jens
"The 'less-is-more'-guy ... he's an asshole." (Billy Decker)
- KVRAF
- 2861 posts since 3 May, 2003 from Germany
Fine catchy lovesong and a well balanced mix!
I like the orchestral intermezzo at the end - nicer than the usual solo guitar, which could have been expected here.
Good work
I like the orchestral intermezzo at the end - nicer than the usual solo guitar, which could have been expected here.
Good work
Symphony Nr.1
Meet the Cities Repair Team Unimportant laughter
music has become meaningless...we just keep doing it
Meet the Cities Repair Team Unimportant laughter
music has become meaningless...we just keep doing it
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1142 posts since 9 Jul, 2006 from Germany
Thank you, tomekk, for your Input.
Much appreciated!
Much appreciated!
"The 'less-is-more'-guy ... he's an asshole." (Billy Decker)
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- KVRist
- 479 posts since 27 Apr, 2005 from Ireland
I like the singers voice and the vocal arrangement. The mix isn't quite there though Imo. It sounds like someone singing to a backing track. The voice could be more "in" the music. You could make the guitars heavier with a vocal like that too. Liked the overall arrangement and the instrumental break at the end also. Good stuff.
- KVRAF
- 1793 posts since 9 Apr, 2011
I agree with the critique about the voice. It's better in the chorus (which is catchy) than in the verse. I think it's just a level thing, and turning the lead vocal down during the verses could fix it. I also like the orchestral bridge. It was really unexpected and added a great character to the song.
"musician."
http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings
http://soundcloud.com/nine-of-kings
- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1142 posts since 9 Jul, 2006 from Germany
Many thanks for your opinion.
Much appreciated.
I don't if I will dig into this again. But I will take this into account next time mixing a song. Or even "producing" in the earlier stages ....
Much appreciated.
I don't if I will dig into this again. But I will take this into account next time mixing a song. Or even "producing" in the earlier stages ....
"The 'less-is-more'-guy ... he's an asshole." (Billy Decker)