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donkey tugger
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3868 posts since 14 Mar, 2002, from the grimness of yorkshire

Postby donkey tugger; Sat Mar 18, 2017 10:02 pm Man From Govt vs DonkeyT - Time Fly - Stadium Pop-Rokk

.....It's a small stadium (a struggling League One football club with financial difficulties maybe) and I only have a limited supply of lighters, having only bought 10 at the pound shop...

This is no.3 in an a seemingly interminable series where I try and fashion something vaguely musically coherent from my boss's tonally and rhythmically challenged acoustic strumming and vocal wailing. He was mumbling some shit about 'appraisals' and 'performance related pay', so I thought now might be a good time to do the next one.

I picked this one at random from the folder of doom and found he's only utterly clipped the guitar recording. No matter I thought, cut it from the verse and I'll layer so much other stuff on top it will be irrelevant, and here we are - stepped over the line from indie to very poor man's C**dp**y, or something.

No doubt some alterations to go on yet - there's a lot going on both with instruments and effects and some of it will probably be pruned, he needs to do a better vocal, plus I'll mix it again later with fresh ears, but I do quite like it (which means he probably ripped off me in the first place), and it may prove that if you throw enough shit, sometimes some of it will stick.

http://www.bennyleeds7.myfreeola.uk/man ... me-fly.mp3
wavephonic
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1192 posts since 10 Sep, 2006, from along the rivers edge in northern Ontario

Postby wavephonic; Mon Mar 20, 2017 5:26 am Re: Man From Govt vs DonkeyT - Time Fly - Stadium Pop-Rokk

"folder of doom" lol. I like it, has a slight nod to u2 the interplay between bass and guitar. personally I respect most all vocals, something I wish I could do more of but my vocal wailing is a heck of alot worse
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nineofkings
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1698 posts since 9 Apr, 2011

Postby nineofkings; Mon Mar 20, 2017 6:14 am Re: Man From Govt vs DonkeyT - Time Fly - Stadium Pop-Rokk

This is a middle class C*ldp**y, at least! The Ebow-like pad in the chorus really makes it. Good job on the U2-esque guitars as well.
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justin3am
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10087 posts since 7 May, 2006, from Southern California

Postby justin3am; Tue Mar 28, 2017 6:59 pm Re: Man From Govt vs DonkeyT - Time Fly - Stadium Pop-Rokk

You make 'im sound like a pro (better than some pros I've worked with). How is this not up to 20+ comments? I think it sounds great...
Ooh, there are a few cringe worthy notes in the second verse and beyond. :lol: Still sounds better than if it were pitch corrected IMO.
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seismic1
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8512 posts since 13 Mar, 2009, from UK

Postby seismic1; Fri Mar 31, 2017 5:00 pm Re: Man From Govt vs DonkeyT - Time Fly - Stadium Pop-Rokk

I listened to this on Monday and it didn't do much for me. Now it's early Saturday morning, and it sounds a lot better. It can't be the beer 'cos I only just popped the top off the first one. It must be the weekend vibes. I think all of the layering paid off. For some reason I think the singer's delivery sounds a little like Gary Daly on this track.

Good work :)

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