Electronic: (We Flourish in the) Mesolimbic Space Glow.
- KVRAF
- 6160 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
A lot of good stuff here.
Sounds like you put some time into the details.
A good strong melodic theme, percussion was perfect, not overbearing, was clean, sat brilliantly in the mix. Much of the sound choices fit well together...although I thought the bass sounded muddy and something else about the sound was not right. Can't put my finger on it.
The arrangement could have better been said in half the time. The whole thing was overstated.
Good work, but not completed.
Sounds like you put some time into the details.
A good strong melodic theme, percussion was perfect, not overbearing, was clean, sat brilliantly in the mix. Much of the sound choices fit well together...although I thought the bass sounded muddy and something else about the sound was not right. Can't put my finger on it.
The arrangement could have better been said in half the time. The whole thing was overstated.
Good work, but not completed.
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here.
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
cool song! nice use of kid voices. kinda "ring around the roses" fit in quite well.
could perhaps use a bit more high end sizzle?
could perhaps use a bit more high end sizzle?
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HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 52 posts since 4 Sep, 2016
Scraped an mp3 off soundcloud and did a basic chop job (in Reaper) to test diff structure... some of the worst edits I have done since being let loose on SoundTools on an Atari in 1994
Think it does work better pace wise... will obv need to d a bit of restructuring around coda, mid 8 and intro.
https://soundcloud.com/unk-cegi/spaceglow-edit
Think it does work better pace wise... will obv need to d a bit of restructuring around coda, mid 8 and intro.
https://soundcloud.com/unk-cegi/spaceglow-edit