Nightime Flickers
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 112 posts since 28 Apr, 2004
Hi folks.
Here's my latest instrumental,it's a folk song type track written on Band in a Box with extra parts added,I think it's quite nice.
https://soundcloud.com/riccledy/nightti ... rumental-v
R.
Here's my latest instrumental,it's a folk song type track written on Band in a Box with extra parts added,I think it's quite nice.
https://soundcloud.com/riccledy/nightti ... rumental-v
R.
- KVRAF
- 40092 posts since 11 Aug, 2008 from clown world
Nighttime F*ckers. I've met a few of them over the years.
I was thinking, this intro is a bit too long. It says on the tin that it's folk, so where are the vocals?
Once I got over the initial 'hurdle', I thought it was very nice.
@ 2:26 (approx') I was expecting to hear a pad under the guitar. It comes in a second or two later. To me it seemed a bit too empty with just the guitar by itself again.
@ 3:28 I thought a note or two from the lead were a bit too much out of tune or key.
I really like the uplifting ending. @4:39 or so, I'm sure I heard another bum note from the lead instrument.
The very end was very abrupt. A nice long sustain on the final chord would have suited well imho.
It's very nice. Just the odd bum note on the lead.
I was thinking, this intro is a bit too long. It says on the tin that it's folk, so where are the vocals?
Once I got over the initial 'hurdle', I thought it was very nice.
@ 2:26 (approx') I was expecting to hear a pad under the guitar. It comes in a second or two later. To me it seemed a bit too empty with just the guitar by itself again.
@ 3:28 I thought a note or two from the lead were a bit too much out of tune or key.
I really like the uplifting ending. @4:39 or so, I'm sure I heard another bum note from the lead instrument.
The very end was very abrupt. A nice long sustain on the final chord would have suited well imho.
It's very nice. Just the odd bum note on the lead.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 112 posts since 28 Apr, 2004
Lol!
Not sure people would have appreciated it if I'd used that title,yeah a few minor blemishes but I have so much to do it got a bit rushed,glad you liked it generally.'
R.
Not sure people would have appreciated it if I'd used that title,yeah a few minor blemishes but I have so much to do it got a bit rushed,glad you liked it generally.'
R.
- KVRAF
- 3177 posts since 28 Aug, 2012 from Melbourne, Australia
Yes, it is quite nice!
Lovely guitars and nice synth (could be louder). As Aloysius said the odd off note...
Cool pads at the end.
Well done!
Lovely guitars and nice synth (could be louder). As Aloysius said the odd off note...
Cool pads at the end.
Well done!
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