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Gucky
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Postby Gucky; Thu May 04, 2017 12:13 am New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted

Today I made a new new track called "Lost ship":
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/lost-ship

Hope you like it.
Feedback is welcome. :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Mon May 08, 2017 8:56 am, edited 2 times in total.
Gucky
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Postby Gucky; Fri May 05, 2017 3:13 am Re: New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted

I just made a new version of the song:
Hope you like it! :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Fri May 05, 2017 9:25 am, edited 1 time in total.
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annode
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Postby annode; Fri May 05, 2017 6:16 am Re: New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted

I like this composition a lot.
I find it riddled with problems with the fader mix and VST parameters. It may also be over limited for these sounds.(bass seq dynamic range becomes too narrow compared with sustained sounds. They get muddy and confused)
I do like this, but it could sound much more professional with some attention to individual space and identity as well as presentation that it's flowing along in time, as sounds are slightly moving in and out/up and back.
This can give it the dimension I think it lacks.
What's in this is really nice, but it sounds primarily like it's all happening at once.
This could really be a great track!
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here. :x
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Postby Gucky; Fri May 05, 2017 9:29 am Re: New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted

Hi annode,
thanks for your help. :-)
I changed now some little things:
- the bass has now no compression
- the stereo separation of the instruments is now better
- I made a kind of break for the bass in the "silence" part.
- the limiting in the master is now not so much so that it must have more dynamic.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/lost-ship

Hope that is now better. :-)
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Postby annode; Sun May 07, 2017 10:06 am Re: New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted

This sounds like a much better mix to me!
Great tune. Like that solo too.
Gonna see what a little touch of mastering here and there can do for it, if anything.
Lots of 'space' now. No clutter now. Good mix.
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here. :x
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Postby Gucky; Sun May 07, 2017 11:19 am Re: New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted

Hi annode,
many thanks for your help.
Wrong usage of the SPL Vitalizer seemed to be my mistake. It was too much Vitalizer.
I am happy that the mix is now okay for you.

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