New Faber song "Lost ship" ; feedback wanted
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Today I made a new new track called "Lost ship":
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/lost-ship
Hope you like it.
Feedback is welcome.
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/lost-ship
Hope you like it.
Feedback is welcome.
Last edited by Gucky on Mon May 08, 2017 4:56 pm, edited 2 times in total.
- KVRAF
- 6160 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
I like this composition a lot.
I find it riddled with problems with the fader mix and VST parameters. It may also be over limited for these sounds.(bass seq dynamic range becomes too narrow compared with sustained sounds. They get muddy and confused)
I do like this, but it could sound much more professional with some attention to individual space and identity as well as presentation that it's flowing along in time, as sounds are slightly moving in and out/up and back.
This can give it the dimension I think it lacks.
What's in this is really nice, but it sounds primarily like it's all happening at once.
This could really be a great track!
I find it riddled with problems with the fader mix and VST parameters. It may also be over limited for these sounds.(bass seq dynamic range becomes too narrow compared with sustained sounds. They get muddy and confused)
I do like this, but it could sound much more professional with some attention to individual space and identity as well as presentation that it's flowing along in time, as sounds are slightly moving in and out/up and back.
This can give it the dimension I think it lacks.
What's in this is really nice, but it sounds primarily like it's all happening at once.
This could really be a great track!
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Hi annode,
thanks for your help.
I changed now some little things:
- the bass has now no compression
- the stereo separation of the instruments is now better
- I made a kind of break for the bass in the "silence" part.
- the limiting in the master is now not so much so that it must have more dynamic.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/lost-ship
Hope that is now better.
thanks for your help.
I changed now some little things:
- the bass has now no compression
- the stereo separation of the instruments is now better
- I made a kind of break for the bass in the "silence" part.
- the limiting in the master is now not so much so that it must have more dynamic.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/lost-ship
Hope that is now better.
- KVRAF
- 6160 posts since 29 Mar, 2003 from Location: Location
This sounds like a much better mix to me!
Great tune. Like that solo too.
Gonna see what a little touch of mastering here and there can do for it, if anything.
Lots of 'space' now. No clutter now. Good mix.
Great tune. Like that solo too.
Gonna see what a little touch of mastering here and there can do for it, if anything.
Lots of 'space' now. No clutter now. Good mix.
....................Don`t blame me for 'The Roots', I just live here.
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- KVRAF
- Topic Starter
- 1905 posts since 26 Sep, 2004
Hi annode,
many thanks for your help.
Wrong usage of the SPL Vitalizer seemed to be my mistake. It was too much Vitalizer.
I am happy that the mix is now okay for you.
many thanks for your help.
Wrong usage of the SPL Vitalizer seemed to be my mistake. It was too much Vitalizer.
I am happy that the mix is now okay for you.