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Kyrpto
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117 posts since 22 Oct, 2016

Postby Kyrpto; Mon May 08, 2017 5:50 am [Dance Pop] Capturing The Moment of Life

This is a Pop song I'm currently working on. I plan to add vocals to this song so it might seem a little repetitive.

https://soundcloud.com/kyrptomusic/idea ... d-mastered
enroe
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Postby enroe; Mon May 08, 2017 10:14 pm Re: [Dance Pop] Capturing The Moment of Life

Yes - your hook-arpeggio is constantly present - through the
whole song. This alone is rather monotonous and obtrusive
IMO. You need a vocal line! :D
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Kyrpto
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Postby Kyrpto; Mon May 08, 2017 10:48 pm Re: [Dance Pop] Capturing The Moment of Life

Yes this song was meant for vocals! It's definitely too repetitive otherwise.
Jesse Gorter
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Postby Jesse Gorter; Tue May 09, 2017 4:06 am Re: [Dance Pop] Capturing The Moment of Life

kinda bouncy, which is fun.
I like the drums too! You could also choose to add in a new melody later
Kyrpto
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Postby Kyrpto; Tue May 09, 2017 6:46 pm Re: [Dance Pop] Capturing The Moment of Life

I just made some changes so the main riff isn't playing the entire time. Should be a lot less repetitive now.

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