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Asking for a review on my track

Hawken
KVRer
 
1 post since 19 May, 2017

Postby Hawken; Fri May 19, 2017 1:01 am Asking for a review on my track

Hey,

So i made my first track (dont be discouraged yet please) wanted others thought on it.
I dont know where im at after my first 5 months
(3 of them been alot procastinating and giving up, heh -remember the feeling?)

I dont feel i can judge my own track versus others at my experience level (cause im so new in this), hoping maybe you can be the judge for it?

Song: https://soundcloud.com/user-301923379/wraps/s-1enO9
Can someone also tell me what genre this is? :P

Thanks in advance,

Hawken.-
insert-name-here
KVRist
 
221 posts since 9 Oct, 2008, from Holland, Den Haag

Postby insert-name-here; Sat May 20, 2017 3:20 pm Re: Asking for a review on my track

At 5 months its pretty good
dont worry about genre, keep making what you make
the rewards can be very high, so can be the frustration :)
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JerGoertz
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1619 posts since 19 Feb, 2004

Postby JerGoertz; Sat May 20, 2017 3:41 pm Re: Asking for a review on my track

A little repetitive, but you've got some interesting elements working together. Keep it up!
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layzer
KVRAF
 
4153 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Postby layzer; Sat May 20, 2017 3:45 pm Re: Asking for a review on my track

mix is good, arangement is on the right track with pauses and change ups. perhaps extend it and add an endiing?
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Jesse Gorter
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687 posts since 30 Nov, 2004

Postby Jesse Gorter; Mon May 22, 2017 8:58 am Re: Asking for a review on my track

it's dancy ish.

It's clearly a beginner tune, but better than most beginners. The arrangement is quite good.
I would work on your melodic skills next, try to really tell a story

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