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Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

biodiode
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Postby biodiode; Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:16 am Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

I have just put the finishing touches to my new studio work area and came up with this Berlin School inspired piece.

https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/autumn- ... -of-uranus
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Aloysius
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Postby Aloysius; Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:19 am Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

You might want to change the title. :lol:
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biodiode
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Postby biodiode; Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:21 am Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

I knew there would be one :lol:
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thecontrolcentre
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Postby thecontrolcentre; Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:24 am Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

biodiode wrote:I knew there would be one :lol:

:lol: :lol:
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Aloysius
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Postby Aloysius; Fri Sep 15, 2017 11:26 am Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

The music is very nice. However, for me, I think the bottom end (no pun intended) is a bit bass heavy. It could be taken as a nice contrast to the light airy melodic top but I think a less muscular kick might help. :)
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Bansaw
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Postby Bansaw; Fri Sep 15, 2017 5:02 pm Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

Great. I actually really like this.
If I had a constructive criticism, I would say that I'm looking for something significant to change between 2:15 and 3:46. The drums to drop out, leaving the bass with a pad for a segment. Something like that.
Well done though.
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davidstiles
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Postby davidstiles; Tue Sep 19, 2017 11:11 pm Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

I really liked this track, and I especially enjoyed the second half, when the groove kicks up and moves us toward the conclusion. I don't have any strong criticisms, except perhaps that the pad element is a bit too strong at the very beginning.
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Postby biodiode; Wed Sep 20, 2017 9:12 am Re: Autumn in the Shadow of Uranus

Thank you all for listening and the constructive feedback, something to think about.

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