Hello Friends,
陽気憂鬱 (Yōki yūutsu) - Borne out of feelings that I could not able to explain, last evening. This is somewhat a different attempt from my usual stuff. Do give it a listen, when you can
https://soundcloud.com/baalisoda/yoki-yuutsu
Cheers!
陽気憂鬱 (Yōki yūutsu) - Cheerful Melancholy
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 239 posts since 7 Apr, 2017 from Fremont, California
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- KVRAF
- 2624 posts since 2 Jun, 2016
Very well produced music, obvious hints of 80s nostalgia, catchy solid drumbeat, excellent mix of elements which work well together, overall a great arrangement built around verse-chorus, good pace and length of track.
Improvements: I'd be tempted to swap out the lead melodic instrument for a professional vocalist; can you do more with the drums?
Overall, excellent effort
Improvements: I'd be tempted to swap out the lead melodic instrument for a professional vocalist; can you do more with the drums?
Overall, excellent effort
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 239 posts since 7 Apr, 2017 from Fremont, California
Thank you so much for such detailed analysis and suggestions.dark water wrote:Very well produced music, obvious hints of 80s nostalgia, catchy solid drumbeat, excellent mix of elements which work well together, overall a great arrangement built around verse-chorus, good pace and length of track.
Improvements: I'd be tempted to swap out the lead melodic instrument for a professional vocalist; can you do more with the drums?
Overall, excellent effort
Much appreciate your time and effort to make comment like this!
Thanks again, sir!