[Techno] EAX / Some feedback wanted ...
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 66 posts since 4 Mar, 2013 from Germany
Hi, i made a new track and would like to hear what you think.
Thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/m2k1/m2k1-eax
Thank you.
https://soundcloud.com/m2k1/m2k1-eax
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 66 posts since 4 Mar, 2013 from Germany
Hey Vortifex,
many thanks for listening and your useful tips. You really listened close to the track. Yes i agree the CHH are a bit
out of place. I program my drums in GEIST2. So i take this failure on me But it thought i program some
kind of polyrhythm to it even if it is not really one.
many thanks for listening and your useful tips. You really listened close to the track. Yes i agree the CHH are a bit
out of place. I program my drums in GEIST2. So i take this failure on me But it thought i program some
kind of polyrhythm to it even if it is not really one.
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Aaron Marshall Aaron Marshall https://www.kvraudio.com/forum/memberlist.php?mode=viewprofile&u=399113
- KVRer
- 29 posts since 29 May, 2017 from Bloomington, Indiana
I think the snare sounds great. Sounds good on my system.
I think transitioning to the 2nd part of the tune could be smoother and more graceful. The groove stopping and restarting needs to ramp up and ramp down somehow. It loses a lot of steam at that point.
The groove sounds tight and in your face. The synth that comes in later (3:15 ish) sounds a little forward, and the percussion, I'd mix back in the mix a bit. Maybe pull it down 3-6db and see what it feels like.
I think transitioning to the 2nd part of the tune could be smoother and more graceful. The groove stopping and restarting needs to ramp up and ramp down somehow. It loses a lot of steam at that point.
The groove sounds tight and in your face. The synth that comes in later (3:15 ish) sounds a little forward, and the percussion, I'd mix back in the mix a bit. Maybe pull it down 3-6db and see what it feels like.
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- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 66 posts since 4 Mar, 2013 from Germany
Hey Aaron, thank you for the helpful tips. I am still learning mixing. It's better but not that i am really satisfied.
I will try that.
I will try that.
- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
production sounds ok, time to focus on composition and arrangement
HW SYNTHS [KORG T2EX - AKAI AX80 - YAMAHA SY77 - ENSONIQ VFX]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
- KVRist
- Topic Starter
- 66 posts since 4 Mar, 2013 from Germany
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
Some nice, tight grooves in there...rhythmically quite interesting.
There's also some effective combinations of synth sounds.
Overall the production is pretty good - just a few tweaks as mentioned by others.
But...
For me it does lack structure and development...too repetitive and 'samey' throughout maybe?
Needs some contrasting material?
Big one for me: It needs a vocal line to lead it or a short, sharp killer synth melody soaring over the top of all those textures.
Definitely worth developing but doesn't sound like a 100% complete piece at the moment.
There's also some effective combinations of synth sounds.
Overall the production is pretty good - just a few tweaks as mentioned by others.
But...
For me it does lack structure and development...too repetitive and 'samey' throughout maybe?
Needs some contrasting material?
Big one for me: It needs a vocal line to lead it or a short, sharp killer synth melody soaring over the top of all those textures.
Definitely worth developing but doesn't sound like a 100% complete piece at the moment.