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Hi, i made a new track and would like to hear what you think.

Thank you.

https://soundcloud.com/m2k1/m2k1-eax

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Last edited by Vortifex on Tue Apr 23, 2019 7:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.

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Hey Vortifex,
many thanks for listening and your useful tips. You really listened close to the track. Yes i agree the CHH are a bit
out of place. I program my drums in GEIST2. So i take this failure on me :-) But it thought i program some
kind of polyrhythm to it even if it is not really one.

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I think the snare sounds great. Sounds good on my system.

I think transitioning to the 2nd part of the tune could be smoother and more graceful. The groove stopping and restarting needs to ramp up and ramp down somehow. It loses a lot of steam at that point.

The groove sounds tight and in your face. The synth that comes in later (3:15 ish) sounds a little forward, and the percussion, I'd mix back in the mix a bit. Maybe pull it down 3-6db and see what it feels like.
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Hey Aaron, thank you for the helpful tips. I am still learning mixing. It's better but not that i am really satisfied. :-)
I will try that.

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production sounds ok, time to focus on composition and arrangement ;)
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Thx layzer. Have to look on this.

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Some nice, tight grooves in there...rhythmically quite interesting.

There's also some effective combinations of synth sounds.

Overall the production is pretty good - just a few tweaks as mentioned by others.

But...

For me it does lack structure and development...too repetitive and 'samey' throughout maybe?

Needs some contrasting material?

Big one for me: It needs a vocal line to lead it or a short, sharp killer synth melody soaring over the top of all those textures.

Definitely worth developing but doesn't sound like a 100% complete piece at the moment.

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