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rvkYoDleFool
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58 posts since 4 Mar, 2013, from Germany

Postby rvkYoDleFool; Tue Jan 23, 2018 9:15 pm Working - Kind of TechNo

A track i started december last year and finished it. Not really finished but i have no motivation anymore.

https://soundcloud.com/m2k1/m2k1-working
winkie00
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189 posts since 9 Jul, 2008, from Newcastle Upon Tyne

Postby winkie00; Thu Jan 25, 2018 10:44 am Re: Working - Kind of TechNo

More reverb and delay on the drums. I can hear what you are trying to get. Don't give up, it just takes more practice than anybody thinks. Im in the same boat : ))
JKillz
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181 posts since 29 Dec, 2017, from USA

Postby JKillz; Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:32 pm Re: Working - Kind of TechNo

I like what you have going here. Certainly has a feel that I am typically drawn to. My only concern is that the track runs longer than needed. It is very similar with some minor differences for 3 passes (at least that I can hear from a first impression). You can prob end it around 5:20ish and call it a day. Or... you can add some new twists and turns in the 3rd verse. You do already to a degree, but they are not impactful enough imo.

In the end, I very much liked this track, keep'em coming :)

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