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thecontrolcentre
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Postby thecontrolcentre; Thu Feb 22, 2018 3:48 pm Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

NO NEED TO SHOUT DUDE!!!
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Postby layzer; Thu Feb 22, 2018 5:22 pm Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

IT WAS OK FOR A FIRST SONG ATTEMPT. TRY TO MATCH THE DRUM VOLUME CLOSER TO
THE OTHER SOUNDS NEXT TIME.
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Postby RUDsc; Fri Feb 23, 2018 5:43 am Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

I HAVE LOST MY CAPS LOCK BUTTON BRO
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Postby whyterabbyt; Fri Feb 23, 2018 5:48 am Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

RUDsc wrote:I HAVE LOST MY CAPS LOCK BUTTON BRO



amazing that it seems to mysteriously work on your soundcloud account as of 2 minutes ago, then.
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Postby RUDsc; Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:21 am Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Hmm, thats weird
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thecontrolcentre
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Postby thecontrolcentre; Fri Feb 23, 2018 7:26 am Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

RUDsc wrote:Hmm, thats weird

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Postby Zexila; Fri Feb 23, 2018 8:17 am Re: CHECK OUT MY NEW TRACK : ) LET ME KNOW WHAT I COULD IMPROVE (TRAP)

Progression works, good potential to have people nodding, but I feel that sound choices aren't that great, spend more time on this for sure.

Here's something for inspiration, notice how this one synth sounds drives this whole simple tune, you need something similar, get little out of the box, especially with brasses and all those trap cliches, you need fresh driving sound to really push it to another level.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NAPTgJeHGMA

Use this as starting point and than just add more oscillators on other octaves and experiment with different waves until something cool comes out.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Y8MK6kuFeCE
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