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Gucky
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Postby Gucky; Sat Mar 17, 2018 3:15 am New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

In my youth I was a big fan of the "Yellow Magic Orchestra"
This a little tribute o YMO
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/mr-sakamoto

Your feedback is welcome. :-)
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ChamMusic
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506 posts since 12 Jun, 2006, from Birmingham, UK

Postby ChamMusic; Sat Mar 17, 2018 5:00 am Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

Like that opening sound and the rhythmic groove.

Very effective melody that enters at around 15 seconds...tight with the groove! One point here - the melody's sound is too similar to the background sounds for me...I'd want something more contrasting.

I enjoyed the overall vibe of this piece a lot and felt that it's melodic content was very strong.

For me, it could maybe be developed even further in terms of the sound combinations + a little more variety in texture.
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Gucky
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Postby Gucky; Sat Mar 17, 2018 3:59 pm Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" feedback welcome

Hi ChamMusic,
thanks for your feedback.
I changed now some little things.
I added to the melody sound now another sound.
And I made a little variation on the melody.
I also changed the vocoder sound. And some othe things. :-)
Hope you like it.
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/mr-sakamoto

Your feedback is welcome.
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ChamMusic
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506 posts since 12 Jun, 2006, from Birmingham, UK

Postby ChamMusic; Sun Mar 18, 2018 3:37 am Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

Melody line is much clearer now...nice!
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Gucky
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1813 posts since 26 Sep, 2004

Postby Gucky; Sun Mar 18, 2018 9:43 am Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

Hi ChamMusic,
many thanks for your help. :-)
I just finished the final version of the song.
I made a little change at the end: I deleted the glitch loop and added a TR77 loop.
Here it is:
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/mr-sakamoto
Chemik
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188 posts since 18 Mar, 2003, from Jacksonville, FL

Postby Chemik; Mon Mar 19, 2018 3:05 am Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

I really like this song. When the extra arps kick in around 1.00 it gets more interesting. A couple comments. With YMO, especially early, the drums always had extra programmed bits Takahashi would trigger from his pads. I think it would add to my second point. For me at least, it seems that this is needing about 1 or 2 more sections with some variance. It gets a little samey by the end.

Still, good job, neat song.
Even I was offended by what I was going to put here.
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Gucky
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Postby Gucky; Mon Mar 19, 2018 4:25 am Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

Hi Chemik,
thanks for your feedback.
To make more variance I added now at the end some reversed crash cymbals and a whistle sound.
Hope you like it. :-)
Last edited by Gucky on Sat Mar 31, 2018 11:38 am, edited 1 time in total.
Gucky
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Postby Gucky; Sat Mar 31, 2018 11:38 am Re: New tribute to YMO song "Mr. Sakomoto" fedback welcome

I was not very happy with the sound quality of the song "Mr. Sakamoto".
So I started to make it better.
I changed one sound, made some panorama changes and some other things.
I hope that it sounds now much better.
What do you think?
https://soundcloud.com/musikus/mr-sakamoto

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