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a.g.o
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52 posts since 15 Nov, 2011

Postby a.g.o; Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:58 am Orchestral 2

Simple orchestral stuff, mostly boring and depressing.

https://soundcloud.com/artemgstuff/orchestral-2
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ChamMusic
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615 posts since 12 Jun, 2006, from Birmingham, UK

Postby ChamMusic; Sat Apr 21, 2018 11:48 am Re: Orchestral 2

"Simple orchestral stuff, mostly boring and depressing."

Not a very positive comment about your own music! :0)

There are some interesting textural moments in this piece...it starts very well, instantly creating a strong, yet peaceful atmosphere.

It doesn't however develop 100% effectively as it continues to progress...

1) Some good melodic ideas don't quite reach their full potential...clunky moments spoil their overall flow for me.

2) Contrasting material towards the end in terms of melody / chords could've also have done with some new sounds / layers etc.

3) It's just a bit too samey throughout...needs extra layers ebbing and flowing.

It's got potential, but needs more work for me.
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