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biodiode
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361 posts since 23 Sep, 2003, from UK

Postby biodiode; Mon May 28, 2018 11:12 am Trapped in the Core

My latest composition for your listening pleasure: https://soundcloud.com/biodiode/trapped-in-the-core
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Mon May 28, 2018 11:30 am Re: Trapped in the Core

Mixed feelings on this one. Mix is fine. Sounds are fine. Arrangement seemed a little loose and without direction in places. Harmonic structure a bit fuzzy at times. Ending was kind of huh? Also, I think melody could have been better defined. Seems the piece was too riff based.

All in all, not bad. Just those few minor nit picks, which is all just personal taste anyway so take it with a minute grain of salt.
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biodiode
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361 posts since 23 Sep, 2003, from UK

Postby biodiode; Tue May 29, 2018 11:43 am Re: Trapped in the Core

Thanks for the feedback, you should have heard the original I had put together :hihi: I trashed a good chunk because I thought it was too repetitive. Frustration may have got the better of me on this track as I had lived with it for too long.

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