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dakkra
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857 posts since 4 Oct, 2012, from Utah

Postby dakkra; Thu Jun 14, 2018 6:44 pm Synthetic Dawn (Chill/ambient dnb)

Hello!

After two years, I've finally gotten back into composing music and finished my first commercial track for the year! It's a little chill out/ ambient track. Feel free to give any kind of feedback you desire.

https://soundcloud.com/dakkra/synthetic-dawn

Enjoy!

Dakkra
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Thu Jun 14, 2018 7:17 pm Re: Synthetic Dawn (Chill/ambient dnb)

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.125

Comments: Music and performance was a bit stagnant for my tastes. Wasn't until around 5 minutes that things started to evolve for me and really picked up. Still, on a 1-10 scale, not bad at all. I actually did enjoy it. Just felt it could have been better. Mix was excellent though.
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layzer
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Postby layzer; Thu Jun 14, 2018 8:04 pm Re: Synthetic Dawn (Chill/ambient dnb)

it was nice, but chill music should not be squashed of dynamic range...imo anyway
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Postby recursive one; Fri Jun 15, 2018 7:38 am Re: Synthetic Dawn (Chill/ambient dnb)

Really good! Solid mix with nice balance of instruments and mellow warm atnosphere. When I read "dnb" I expected faster beats, around 170 bpm or so, but I enjoyed it anyway. Don't think it's stagnant, it evolves in the right direction and acheives the desired effect. Great job.
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