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jethrobull
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1334 posts since 5 Jun, 2011, from England,UK

Postby jethrobull; Fri Jun 29, 2018 4:45 pm Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

https://soundcloud.com/jethrobull/where-do-we-belong

An unfinished track using only SonicCharge Plugins and the beautiful Cellspace soundbanks from Ghostwave Audio.
Quite some work to do but your comments and feedback a very much appreciated.
Thank you for listening.
Last edited by jethrobull on Sat Jun 30, 2018 8:23 am, edited 1 time in total.
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Fri Jun 29, 2018 5:06 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.75

Comments: When you say unfinished, do you mean the mix, the arrangement, melody? Hard to know what to comment on without knowing what's left to be done. Melody wise, it's minimalist but moving in arrangement so it works. Mix does sound like it's not quite there yet so that's probably what you're referring to by unfinished but not sure if that's all. What you have so far is pretty good for unfinished. Some finished tracks don't sound this good. So well done so far.
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Postby Eauson; Fri Jun 29, 2018 6:03 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Nice track, picking up high freq ringin @ beginning on higher notes, intensional? Noticeable on small speakers and headphones, may not on larger setup.
Strings nice, bit of added warmth with volumes short increase at certain stages, verb or saturation.
Overall pleasant track has afx feel, would like variation on beat, bit of a click on kick..
Other than that
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jethrobull
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Postby jethrobull; Sat Jun 30, 2018 6:32 am Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 9
Instruments - 9
Performance - 9
Mix - 8

Overall - 8.75

Comments: When you say unfinished, do you mean the mix, the arrangement, melody? Hard to know what to comment on without knowing what's left to be done. Melody wise, it's minimalist but moving in arrangement so it works. Mix does sound like it's not quite there yet so that's probably what you're referring to by unfinished but not sure if that's all. What you have so far is pretty good for unfinished. Some finished tracks don't sound this good. So well done so far.

Hi and thank you for listening. Really appreciate your comments and the feedback system :tu: . Yeah,sorry it's mainly the mix that's unfinished. I wont be adding any more sounds/instruments. Just maybe some fills and a little more percussion. Some tweaking of the arrangement slightly.
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
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https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
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Postby mevla; Sat Jun 30, 2018 7:25 am Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Nice track, nice composition. The Ghostwave sounds are very nice. Synplant is nice. It was also nice to hear sounds from Microtonic which are more acoustic.

Cheers.
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jethrobull
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Postby jethrobull; Wed Jul 04, 2018 3:47 am Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Eauson wrote:Nice track, picking up high freq ringin @ beginning on higher notes, intensional? Noticeable on small speakers and headphones, may not on larger setup.
Strings nice, bit of added warmth with volumes short increase at certain stages, verb or saturation.
Overall pleasant track has afx feel, would like variation on beat, bit of a click on kick..
Other than that
:tu:

Hey thank you for listening. I really appreciate your feedback :tu:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
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myfeebleeffort
https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
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jethrobull
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1334 posts since 5 Jun, 2011, from England,UK

Postby jethrobull; Sat Jul 07, 2018 12:16 am Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

mevla wrote:Nice track, nice composition. The Ghostwave sounds are very nice. Synplant is nice. It was also nice to hear sounds from Microtonic which are more acoustic.

Cheers.

Thank you for taking the time to listen. Yes they are great soundbanks. Synplant still amazes me. Can't wait for the update. :hyper:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
.......................
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https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
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seismic1
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Postby seismic1; Fri Jul 13, 2018 3:15 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

This one manages to be both sombre and uplifting at the same time. You're playing with my head again. Nice choice of sounds. I really liked the big sounding bass, almost like a pipe-organ. It worked very well with the sounds in the higher registers, which might explain the contrast I noted earlier. The microtonic percussion was great too.

Good work :)
fastlanephil
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Postby fastlanephil; Sat Jul 14, 2018 4:54 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Nice track!

An interesting combination moods. As your title implies, sort of purgatorial.
Richard deHove
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Postby Richard deHove; Sat Jul 14, 2018 5:23 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

Really liked the mood until the drums came in. They pulled things back into the ordinary, especially as the pattern then didn't change much and the drum sounds were also quite standard. Instead of drums, an interesting lead sound would have made this a far more emotional and deep track imo. That said, I still liked it very much, so put me in the 'positive reply' camp.
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jethrobull
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Postby jethrobull; Wed Jul 18, 2018 2:23 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

seismic1 wrote:This one manages to be both sombre and uplifting at the same time. You're playing with my head again. Nice choice of sounds. I really liked the big sounding bass, almost like a pipe-organ. It worked very well with the sounds in the higher registers, which might explain the contrast I noted earlier. The microtonic percussion was great too.

Good work :)

As always I really appreciate your comments and feedback Tim. Sorry to mess with your head but now you can have a little glimpse of what is going on in mine :D :tu:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
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https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/
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Postby jethrobull; Fri Jul 20, 2018 7:37 pm Re: Where Do We Belong ( A SonicCharge TraCK)

fastlanephil wrote:Nice track!

An interesting combination moods. As your title implies, sort of purgatorial.

Thank you for listening and the feedback.I really appreciate it! :tu:
All the audience cares about is being fed a stream of songs that they know and can sing along to.
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https://hearthis.at/83hdtrvm/

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