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OnlyAmbientMusic
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3 posts since 12 Feb, 2018

Postby OnlyAmbientMusic; Sun Jul 01, 2018 4:42 am Ambient Track

Hello everyone, my new work in ambient style, calm rhythm, piano, for your review :) Thank you
https://soundcloud.com/ambient-music-354368422/road-in-the-forest
Eauson
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635 posts since 8 Jan, 2013, from morf

Postby Eauson; Sun Jul 01, 2018 7:25 am Re: Ambient Track

Nice start, like the light opens the show, flows nicely, leaves,wind slowly shakes, bass, comes in, would have liked more attack, slow the suddenness of it, horn type sounds add nice texture, seems to suddenly get swamped, too many things, piano nice, softer possibly, building up, all sounds seems to be in a rush somehow, bells panning left to right, not sure its heading anywhere though, could add stormy feel, rains seem to be there from a slight glitchy addition.
Not having a go at you its nice an all, could just be more delicate in its approach.

GL :D
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el-bo (formerly ebow)
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10192 posts since 24 May, 2009, from A galaxy, far far away

Postby el-bo (formerly ebow); Sun Jul 01, 2018 7:46 am Re: Ambient Track

I agree with Euson in that it might benefit from a more delicate approach. Give everything it's place in time and space. You actually do this around the 4-minute mark, anyway, and it allows things to breathe a lot more.

Either way, I really enjoy the piece. And with some slight 'carving', a great sound palette. Followed! :tu:

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