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Aro
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28 posts since 15 Mar, 2018, from Canada

Postby Aro; Fri Jul 06, 2018 4:29 am My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Here's one of my recent tunes. Its created with almost all Absynth instances, except for one vocal track. I welcome feedback.

Thanks for listening.

https://soundcloud.com/lionsclub-1/my-b ... e-art-thou
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Fri Jul 06, 2018 6:57 am Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 8
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Love the synth sounds on this one. Performance a little static but a lot of this genre is so nothing new there. Definitely an enjoyable listen. Definitely liked the variety in the arrangement.
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Postby wagtunes; Fri Jul 06, 2018 6:57 am Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

My Feedback

Music - 8.5
Instruments - 9.5
Performance - 8
Mix - 9

Overall - 8.75

Comments: Love the synth sounds on this one. Performance a little static but a lot of this genre is so nothing new there. Definitely an enjoyable listen. Definitely liked the variety in the arrangement.
Aro
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28 posts since 15 Mar, 2018, from Canada

Postby Aro; Sun Jul 08, 2018 4:20 am Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Thanks for the review wagtunes! I appreciate!
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Postby DeeFoxx; Sun Jul 08, 2018 11:32 am Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

The first 1:30 minutes sounds good. The transition moments could use some subtle changes around mixing one arrangement to the next. Specifically I'm talking about 2:14. The kick needs some tailoring too just to make it stand out a bit more. I think the kick kind of gets lost in the mix. Good sound design though I enjoyed your variations.
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Jace-BeOS
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Postby Jace-BeOS; Sun Jul 08, 2018 11:49 am Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Interesting sounds. Interesting structure. I'll have to listen to it again, on a proper sound system, as I was thinking the vocal is buried or obstructed by some of the synth sounds...
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Aro
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28 posts since 15 Mar, 2018, from Canada

Postby Aro; Mon Jul 09, 2018 3:54 am Re: My Brother Where Art Thou - Electronic Experimental Pop

Thanks DeeFoxx and Jace-BeOS for your input and for listening. I will take what you said into consideration.

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