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lil big Dillon
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Postby lil big Dillon; Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:48 am Me Myself and I Remix (first forum post)

Hi, I just joined the forum looking for some feedback. I've been looking for a forum for music production help, so we'll see how this goes!

I have no music history. I just started messing around with FL studio/ youtube about 4-5 months ago.

https://soundcloud.com/dillon-nusrala/m ... i-remix-81

looking for honest feedback here whether it's creative or objective. Don't try to be nice lol

it's 128 bpm (just happened to sound best at that bpm) and it's like trap/dubstep/idontknow i was just doing what i thought sounded good.
Last edited by lil big Dillon on Sun Jul 08, 2018 1:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:56 am Re: Me Myself and I Remix (first forum post)

My Feedback

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 7.5
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 6

Overall - 7.125

Comments: Bass really rumbles on my system badly. Needs the bottom mud taken out BADLY. Some of the vocal EQing is also questionable at best. The radio EQ at the intro was way too extreme. Song was okay if not a little bit cliche.
lil big Dillon
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Postby lil big Dillon; Sun Jul 08, 2018 7:59 am Re: Me Myself and I Remix (first forum post)

thank you!!
the vocals are hardly eq'd (unless you mean the fades) but it could just be bad quality in the first place
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thecontrolcentre
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Postby thecontrolcentre; Sun Jul 08, 2018 8:07 am Re: Me Myself and I Remix (first forum post)

Who is the original track by? Interested to compare them.
lil big Dillon
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Postby lil big Dillon; Sun Jul 08, 2018 8:11 am Re: Me Myself and I Remix (first forum post)

thecontrolcentre wrote:Who is the original track by? Interested to compare them.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bSfpSOBD30U
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Postby lil big Dillon; Sun Jul 08, 2018 8:15 am Re: Me Myself and I Remix (first forum post)

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 7.5
Instruments - 7.5
Performance - 7.5
Mix - 6

Overall - 7.125

Comments: Bass really rumbles on my system badly. Needs the bottom mud taken out BADLY. Some of the vocal EQing is also questionable at best. The radio EQ at the intro was way too extreme. Song was okay if not a little bit cliche.


https://soundcloud.com/dillon-nusrala/m ... -i-remix-8
is the bass better? also i changed the vocal eq very slightly but i kept the radio intro.

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