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Samuel_S
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110 posts since 25 Apr, 2018, from USA

Postby Samuel_S; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:03 pm My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

Here's my song I made 2 months ago
I actually made this song (more of a shortened excerpt) in MuLab  and I didn't know how to use it so yeah the composition is quite repetitive and boring but I decided to share here because I'm curious. 
This is Samuel S. I make music for fun even if it isn't music.
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:10 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

My Feedback

Music - 5
Instruments - 5
Performance - 5
Mix - 5

Overall - 5

Comments: Well, the lead is way too loud for the background arp. I think I'll just leave it at that.
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thecontrolcentre
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Postby thecontrolcentre; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:14 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

80s synthpop? :?
Samuel_S
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Postby Samuel_S; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:19 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

thecontrolcentre wrote:80s synthpop? :?

well not specifically but it reminds me of 80s synthpop, particularly Mr. Mister - Broken Wings.
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Samuel_S
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Postby Samuel_S; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:21 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 5
Instruments - 5
Performance - 5
Mix - 5

Overall - 5

Comments: Well, the lead is way too loud for the background arp. I think I'll just leave it at that.

I'm guessing the 5s are out of 5 so thanks. And yeah, I agree the lead is loud but it's actually a factory MuLab ambient piano sound through the Azurite chorus plugin
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wagtunes
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Postby wagtunes; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:23 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

Samuel_S wrote:
wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 5
Instruments - 5
Performance - 5
Mix - 5

Overall - 5

Comments: Well, the lead is way too loud for the background arp. I think I'll just leave it at that.

I'm guessing the 5s are out of 5 so thanks. And yeah, I agree the lead is loud but it's actually a factory MuLab ambient piano sound through the Azurite chorus plugin


No, the 5s are on a scale of 1-10.
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110 posts since 25 Apr, 2018, from USA

Postby Samuel_S; Tue Jul 10, 2018 5:34 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

wagtunes wrote:
Samuel_S wrote:
wagtunes wrote:My Feedback

Music - 5
Instruments - 5
Performance - 5
Mix - 5

Overall - 5

Comments: Well, the lead is way too loud for the background arp. I think I'll just leave it at that.

I'm guessing the 5s are out of 5 so thanks. And yeah, I agree the lead is loud but it's actually a factory MuLab ambient piano sound through the Azurite chorus plugin


No, the 5s are on a scale of 1-10.

Thanks for the 50%
This is Samuel S. I make music for fun even if it isn't music.
fastlanephil
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Postby fastlanephil; Tue Jul 10, 2018 7:35 pm Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

As it is, as you implied, it goes no where but if you work at it I think it could become much more.
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Postby Samuel_S; Wed Jul 11, 2018 2:52 am Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

fastlanephil wrote:As it is, as you implied, it goes no where but if you work at it I think it could become much more.

Maybe, although this was like an interlude or whatever but I could try to do something like this again.
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el-bo (formerly ebow)
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Postby el-bo (formerly ebow); Wed Jul 11, 2018 3:20 am Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

Samuel_S wrote:I agree the lead is loud but it's actually a factory MuLab ambient piano sound through the Azurite chorus plugin


Nothing about that fact stops you from turning it down in the mix so it blends better.

My thoughts are that this is a nice intro, and that it might be worth you trying to develop it into a fully-fledged piece :shrug:
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Postby ghettosynth; Wed Jul 11, 2018 3:39 am Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

Wags is right though, that lead is WAY too loud for the background. Also, is the lead in key/tune?
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110 posts since 25 Apr, 2018, from USA

Postby Samuel_S; Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:07 am Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

el-bo (formerly ebow) wrote:
Samuel_S wrote:I agree the lead is loud but it's actually a factory MuLab ambient piano sound through the Azurite chorus plugin


Nothing about that fact stops you from turning it down in the mix so it blends better.

My thoughts are that this is a nice intro, and that it might be worth you trying to develop it into a fully-fledged piece :shrug:

I don't know what happened to the original project file so I don't know how I can recreate it and turn it into a real thing. I'll find out somehow
This is Samuel S. I make music for fun even if it isn't music.
Samuel_S
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110 posts since 25 Apr, 2018, from USA

Postby Samuel_S; Wed Jul 11, 2018 11:08 am Re: My song I made called "80 synthpop ambient thing"

ghettosynth wrote:Wags is right though, that lead is WAY too loud for the background. Also, is the lead in key/tune?

I think it's in tune, why do you ask?
This is Samuel S. I make music for fun even if it isn't music.

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