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mr.me
KVRAF
2086 posts since 11 Feb, 2003

Post Sun Jan 20, 2013 8:01 am

I like to think it's a mellow jazzy thing...but I'm sure I wrong.

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polyslax
KVRAF
8072 posts since 12 Dec, 2003 from Canada

Post Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:20 am

A little less quirky than some of your arrangements, but no less awesome. The pizz and Wurli-ish combo is a winner, and I love the bass line. :tu:
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seismic1
KVRAF
9007 posts since 13 Mar, 2009 from UK

Post Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:32 am

This is definitely mellower than some of your other tracks, but still recognisably mr.me. The pizzicato thing definitely says "China" to me. I like the eerie pads that come and go throughout. The bass and drums are actually quite heavy (in a relaxed way). Oh yeah. This mix is nice 'n' clear.

Good work :)

MickGael
KVRAF
1819 posts since 5 Oct, 2003

Post Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:47 am

Nice groove! I like the bass line.
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Frantz
KVRAF
4809 posts since 18 Jul, 2008 from New York

Post Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:33 pm

This is a nice change of pace from the more menacing material. I like the arrangement with different parts popping in and out to keep things interesting. Very enjoyable. :tu:

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layzer
KVRAF
5512 posts since 11 Jun, 2006

Post Sun Jan 20, 2013 9:48 pm

bravo! :clap: with the others on the bass, solid and clear as were the drums and vocals. enjoyed :x
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Acrobat
KVRian
894 posts since 9 Aug, 2004 from Rome, Italy

Post Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:13 am

The composition itself is very cool and much unheard, I have just some remarks on excessive repeating in lyrics and about the timbres: sounds are not interesting at all and very "General Midi". There's much to do on that side, substituting abused timbres with more fitting ones, IMHO, overall quality would rise abruptly. :) :wink:

mr.me
KVRAF
2086 posts since 11 Feb, 2003

Post Mon Jan 21, 2013 12:23 pm

Thanks for the feedback and advice.

Acrobat: I'm often guilty repeating vocals, as far as everything else I'll keep it in mind for a remix. :wink:

Mariosprt
KVRist
320 posts since 4 Feb, 2012

Post Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:58 pm

It's mellow yes, and with a fine ambience,
The mix seems a bit dry, maybe it's conscious, specially the hats.
Anyway good style :)

mr.me
KVRAF
2086 posts since 11 Feb, 2003

Post Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:07 pm

Mariosprt wrote:It's mellow yes, and with a fine ambience,
The mix seems a bit dry, maybe it's conscious, specially the hats.
Anyway good style :)
Dry indeed, I usually pile on the FX.

Thank you for having a listen. :D

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