Hello!
After two years, I've finally gotten back into composing music and finished my first commercial track for the year! It's a little chill out/ ambient track. Feel free to give any kind of feedback you desire.
https://soundcloud.com/dakkra/synthetic-dawn
Enjoy!
Dakkra
Synthetic Dawn (Chill/ambient dnb)
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 1441 posts since 4 Oct, 2012 from Utah
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- KVRAF
- 21196 posts since 8 Oct, 2014
Music - 7.5
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 9
Overall - 8.125
Comments: Music and performance was a bit stagnant for my tastes. Wasn't until around 5 minutes that things started to evolve for me and really picked up. Still, on a 1-10 scale, not bad at all. I actually did enjoy it. Just felt it could have been better. Mix was excellent though.
Instruments - 8
Performance - 8
Mix - 9
Overall - 8.125
Comments: Music and performance was a bit stagnant for my tastes. Wasn't until around 5 minutes that things started to evolve for me and really picked up. Still, on a 1-10 scale, not bad at all. I actually did enjoy it. Just felt it could have been better. Mix was excellent though.
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- KVRAF
- 7691 posts since 11 Jun, 2006
it was nice, but chill music should not be squashed of dynamic range...imo anyway
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HW MODULES [OBi M1000 - ROLAND MKS-50 - ROLAND JV880 - KURZ 1000PX]
SW [CHARLATAN - OBXD - OXE - ELEKTRO - MICROTERA - M1 - SURGE - RMiV]
DAW [ENERGY XT2/1U RACK WINXP / MAUDIO 1010LT PCI]
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- KVRAF
- 5664 posts since 7 Feb, 2013
Really good! Solid mix with nice balance of instruments and mellow warm atnosphere. When I read "dnb" I expected faster beats, around 170 bpm or so, but I enjoyed it anyway. Don't think it's stagnant, it evolves in the right direction and acheives the desired effect. Great job.
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