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lil big Dillon · Post by **lil big Dillon** » Sat Aug 11, 2018 2:20 am

ok i know it's bad
what stands out the most as being bad?
why is this so bad?
help

https://soundcloud.com/dillon-nusrala/house-8-11-2018

oxygenmask · Post by **oxygenmask** » Sat Aug 11, 2018 2:27 am

That pad is awful. Maybe swap it for something more subtle? I like the main synth riff. Maybe more rhythm in your bass line? Maybe beef up the percussion underneath? It's tough to tell because I hate the pad so much, so I would definitely start there.

lil big Dillon · Post by **lil big Dillon** » Sat Aug 11, 2018 2:54 am

ya but its probably not worth the effort thanks for the advice f**k this song imma start over :/

AnX · Post by **AnX** » Sat Aug 11, 2018 3:07 am

lil big Dillon wrote: what stands out the most as being bad?

The lingo

el-bo (formerly ebow) · Sat Aug 11, 2018 6:21 am

AnX wrote:
lil big Dillon wrote: what stands out the most as being bad?

The lingo

You got there just before me

just dropped this sick new beat