europal
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- KVRist
- 35 posts since 24 Jul, 2018
I found this one a bit uninteressting. But thats just my opinion. The wide stereo imagery is very pleasant, but comes with some phase issues. You could move things 'up' and 'down' a bit more instead of just left and right.
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- KVRian
- 884 posts since 3 Jan, 2016
I think it’s pretty good but maybe it needs to be shortened or it could use little more development. Could it be a EDM track with a punchier percussion?
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- KVRist
- 35 posts since 24 Jul, 2018
You probably could turn anything into everything, but i'd say this one works on its own. It has a certain dreamlike atmosphere, which is quite nice. The voice adds a lot to that too. It just does not go 'all the way' in my opinion. As far as the composition goes, it would work nice in a movie or game scene. What i was missing the most was the context. Also the wide spread requires a lot of attention and sensitivity when it comes to balancing and mixing.
However, you are putting out a lot of songs lately, and it feels your focus has shifted. Not surprising though, and i wouldn't worry too much about it. Some other issues have already been pointed out in other threads, and i love how you keep experimenting and advancing in your techniques. So with that in mind, nagging about structure might be a bit inappropriate, but thats also part of the song. And it is one of your strongest features in my opinion.
However, you are putting out a lot of songs lately, and it feels your focus has shifted. Not surprising though, and i wouldn't worry too much about it. Some other issues have already been pointed out in other threads, and i love how you keep experimenting and advancing in your techniques. So with that in mind, nagging about structure might be a bit inappropriate, but thats also part of the song. And it is one of your strongest features in my opinion.
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- KVRian
- Topic Starter
- 553 posts since 27 Aug, 2008
Lot of the song i put up lately are songs made some years ago, that i remove from SoundCloud and now iup again. And maded with instrument that i dont have anymore. Many sounds bds are from elektron analog four
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- KVRian
- 893 posts since 12 Jun, 2006
What is there definitely works...I enjoyed listening to it.
But - it is a little bit limited in its musical content and development of ideas...no big hooks / strong leading melodies etc.
Shame it's an old track where you don't have the equipment anymore as it has potential to be tweaked into something very good indeed!
But - it is a little bit limited in its musical content and development of ideas...no big hooks / strong leading melodies etc.
Shame it's an old track where you don't have the equipment anymore as it has potential to be tweaked into something very good indeed!
Agreed 100% - needs more variety from front to back of the soundstage rather than just relying on left to right.Nubm wrote:The wide stereo imagery is very pleasant, but comes with some phase issues.
